Congrats Paul! I loved this line, and thought it captured the story well, the mood, and Mercury's dialogue with Walton. "The motorcade, like an uncoiled python, crept down the boulevard." Well done. Perfect ending too.
"To Europe, of all places. France. Walton hated France. He hated its smell. Its sounds. Its food." Huh?!? All I can say about your short-story is...Wow! Thanks, for sharing! DeeDee ;-D
12 comments:
Congrats Paul! I loved this line, and thought it captured the story well, the mood, and Mercury's dialogue with Walton.
"The motorcade, like an uncoiled python, crept down the boulevard."
Well done. Perfect ending too.
Nice one, Paul! Tight little story, well-deserved.
Hi! Paul D.Brazill...
Congratulation!...I will check out your story...shortly!
Thanks, for the link too!
By the way, here goes a link pertaining to your
last post about actress Gloria Graham The Film Forum and Fritz Lang
DeeDee ;-D
"To Europe, of all places. France. Walton hated France. He hated its smell. Its sounds. Its food."
Huh?!?
All I can say about your short-story is...Wow!
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
Congrats Paul! I'll be sure to head over there and check it out.
Wow, excellent!
Terrific story! Congratulations.
congrats pdb, well done.
Many congrats Paul and very well deserved.
Kind regards.
Just read it Paul, really nice work. Congratulations on the win, well deserved!
Thanks all. Glad you enjoyed it.
Stellar writing, Paul. A well deserved win. This year has been so spectacular for you. Keep up the good work. <3
Post a Comment