Over at 6S today, the writer Jeanette Cheezum suggested that I should write a Six Sentences piece again. Well, this is what I came up with!
The Crime Scene by Paul D. Brazill
Black gaffer tape and a broken Polaroid camera. A suitcase, empty except for the charred remains of one hundred dollar bills. Rusty, brown bloodstains and a worn length of rope. A faded newspaper and a creaking chair. The faint smell of urine and the echos of screams. And the sound of something moving in the shadows.
(c) Paul D. Brazill 2010.
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He Would Say That, Wouldn't He?
13 comments:
Hi! Paul D. Brazil...
What a great use of six-sentences...most definitely, "caught" and held my attention!
Thanks, for sharing!
DeeDee ;-D
Thanks for all the comments, Dee Dee, and the Twittering, too!
Wow it HAS been awhile since I've seen you crank out a 6S. Great stuff.
That's a beauty Paul!
Atmospheric. Great 6!
Now that looks like a great outline for a story. Just need to throw a character in the mix.
Wow. That is intensely creepy. You haven't lost the knack.
Ah, I love that last sentence!
Thanks all. it was nice to do something so short again. Patti...mmmm,ponder, ponder ...
Packs a creepy punch.
Great descriptive little piece. Says so much for so short! Puts me right there...and it isn't a place I particularly want to be!
Thanks all!
Ooh, I enjoyed that - nice work!
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