Sunday, 25 April 2010

(IN THE) COLD LIGHT OF DAY - My Gischler Write Off entry.



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10 comments:

Michael Solender said...

the horns of a dilemma indeedy. smart. very smart.

Richard Godwin said...

Pacy, acerbic, Paul it seems drink agrees with you. Great stuff.

Pamila Payne said...

Wonderful opening, Paul. I love unlikely, mismatched pairs. You're really developing a style of contemporary noir that's uniquely yours.

PipeTobacco said...

Wonderful story. I too especially like the opening. The style is very classically done "gumshoe". I enjoyed it greatly.

I do think, however, your William Conrad picture is of the "Cannon" era, and not the "Nero Wolfe" era (I am a fan of the cheesy show, "Cannon").

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pegjet said...

As always, masterful noir with spot-on imagery.

Jarrett said...

Good stuff, Paul. Some very nice phrases, but this was my favorite: "After a few sips the words tumbled out of her mouth like a gang of drunks staggering out of a pub at closing time ..."

I think you have a winning pair here. I'd love to read more about this mismatched set.

Paul D. Brazill said...

Cheers all. I think I'll continue with these two , then.

Eric Beetner said...

Definitely continue Paul. This is a great start to a beautiful friendship.

David Barber said...

A top write Mr Brazill that you should continue. An opening sentence is always one of the most important parts of a story and yours in this piece is a belter. :-)

chad rohrbacher said...

Fantastic voice! What a great character.

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